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Post  Betelgeuse Black Thu May 12, 2011 10:53 am

. Immediately, the hat proclaimed "Gryffindor!"

I thought the hat would have seen that Fred and George were so similar that it would immediately have duplicated it's sorting of Fred. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2353527630

I liked the previous story. There are some parts that could be improved with editing (as with almost all stories) but I think it stands up well as it is. I really liked the idea of adding a friendly companion to help. Once it was suggested, I thought it made a lot of sense. It was one of those "why didn't I think of that" moments. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2398211921

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Post  Potteraholic Thu May 12, 2011 12:52 pm

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"I knew it!" Fred called

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Thanks, Mona. After a couple of days, it's back to anonymity for me, and the avatar with an image of Andrew Goldsworthy's work . Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 464751818

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Post  Verity Weasley Thu May 12, 2011 1:07 pm

triumphantly, as George joined them

PAH, I agree with Mona. It's a lovely photo - you were very cute as a first grader - not like the ones I had today! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 793915934 I meant to comment on it when you first changed it, but got sidetracked with the story. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2752390508
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Post  Potteraholic Thu May 12, 2011 2:25 pm

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his fellow Gryffindors.

Charlie clapped both


Since it was just Fred who said,"I knew it!", shouldn't it be "as George joined him"? So I'm going to remove 'them' in the previous post and have added a 6th word to balance it out.

Thanks, Verity. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2752390508 My mom was very fond of ribbons and lace. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2222139670

And Mona, I don't think I ever said it before, when you put up your current avatar, but it's a lovely picture of you and you have such a wonderfully contemplative expression. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2752390508


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Post  Verity Weasley Thu May 12, 2011 2:44 pm

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Post  Puck Thu May 12, 2011 2:57 pm

said, "I already warned my

I'm loving the pictures, too! Did you grow up in NY, or have you relocated from elsewhere?
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Post  Potteraholic Thu May 12, 2011 6:16 pm

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friends about you two troublemakers.

Puck, I was born in India, moved Stateside when I was 3, lived in NYC (not Manhattan, but one of the other boros) 'til i was 8, then moved to a suburb north of NYC, where my parents still live today. I've been in Brooklyn for 15 years.

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Post  Puck Thu May 12, 2011 8:09 pm

They'll hex you if you

Thanks, PAH. Just curious. I guess I always think of NYC as someplace people move to, not a place people grow up. Silly, because I know that is not true.

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Post  Potteraholic Thu May 12, 2011 9:02 pm

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try anything funny." But Charlie

Checked the Lexicon... Bill's been gone 2 years, Charlie's in his 7th year, and Percy's a 3rd year.

Sure thing, Puck. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2752390508 Over the years, I've vacationed in your neck of the woods - New England (Cape Cod-MA, York-ME, Lake Winnipesaukee-NH, various skiing places in VT) - and I always think of those places as getaway spots, for lots of R&R. It's all relative. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2222139670


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Post  Verity Weasley Fri May 13, 2011 2:20 am

softened his words with a


...wink?
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Post  Mona Fri May 13, 2011 2:34 am

wink, and the twins grinned

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Thanks, PAH! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 266347159 It's actually part of a much bigger pic of me, hubby, son, SIL, and SIL's hubby, taken last easter. I don't seem to have any of the three of us alone so I first cropped out SIL and her hubby, but the three of us remaining didn't work as a group, so I ended up cropping out everything except my face!
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Post  Julia H. Fri May 13, 2011 4:23 am

happily. They could hardly wait

I think, despite some surprising sentences, Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 464751818 the last story was one of our better ones - and a lot of fun to write. The task was ideally specified by the beginning of the story: Harry and Ginny had to do something about Mrs Black and they had to succeed eventually.

We didn't find out much about the painting of magical portraits, but perhaps we'll have another chance in the future...

As for why Kreacher did not suggest Regulus at once, I guess he was thinking of Mrs Black's friends at first (the ones he had most often seen her with), and not so much of who he, personally, would like to see most. Even if Regulus was the favourite son, I think Mrs Black must have been, as a mother, rather dominant and not excessively indulgent, so I'm glad she got along so well with her "returned" son. Kreacher has also understood by now that, at the end of his life, Regulus broke with the family values finally. I definitely saw some risks for Regulus in the "shared" portrait. Perhaps these were the reasons why Kreacher did not think of him immediately as the most likely person Walburga would be happy to see. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2222139670


I really like the ending. I wonder how Harry and Ginny will "decorate accordingly" though. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 1003735042 Using lots of green? Putting up Professor Snape's portrait next to his colleague's? Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2775603007

Great picture, PAH! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2752390508
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Post  Puck Fri May 13, 2011 6:37 am

to see Gryffindor tower.

Dinner
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Post  Potteraholic Fri May 13, 2011 7:04 am

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started soon after Professor Dumbledore

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Post  Puck Fri May 13, 2011 7:51 am

had finished his Welcome speech.

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Post  Potteraholic Fri May 13, 2011 9:22 am

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He had told the first-years

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Post  Puck Fri May 13, 2011 10:40 am

never to enter the Forbidden

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Post  Mona Fri May 13, 2011 10:53 am

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Post  Julia H. Fri May 13, 2011 12:57 pm

it was a very dangerous

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Post  Puck Fri May 13, 2011 2:34 pm

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Post  Potteraholic Fri May 13, 2011 3:10 pm

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night would be highly inadvisable

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Post  Puck Fri May 13, 2011 3:15 pm

as Filch needed help cleaning



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Post  Potteraholic Fri May 13, 2011 3:51 pm

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Greenhouse Two after the sudden

I'm sure someone can think of some herbological disaster or the other. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 1003735042 And Puck, what's Filching? Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 1242326132 Shouldn't it be just Filch?

Just over 27 pages left in this thread x 15 posts per page = approx. 400 posts. So we can write either one 2,000 word story or two 1,000-worders. Any thoughts?


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Me,too! When I was searching for an image for a new avatar for this story, I knew this one was the one. They look so mischievous! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 23 2447527733

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Post  Puck Fri May 13, 2011 8:45 pm

bursting of the bubotuber plants.
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Post  Potteraholic Fri May 13, 2011 9:06 pm

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Between mouthfuls of shepherd's pie,

I probably should post an update soon...

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