Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV)

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Post  Mona on Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:29 am

OVER UNTIL DINNER.

1640: RON

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Post  Puck on Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:37 am

'S FATHER ENTERS THE KITCHEN. RON



I wasn't sure if he'd left, but I figured he'd want to see the look on Ron's face when he sees the car.
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Post  Verity Weasley on Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:45 am

SEEMED SURPRISED TO SEE HIM

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Post  Puck on Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:50 am

. HERMIONE ENTERS, A HUGE SMILE

Period/full stop needed. ~PAH
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Post  Julia H. on Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:52 am

IN ON HER FACE. RON QUICKLY

'on' fits the phrase better. ~PAH

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Post  Mona on Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:37 am

SWALLOWS THE LAST MOUTHFUL OF

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Post  Verity Weasley on Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:32 pm

CRUSTY BREAD AND CHEESE HE'D

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Post  Puck on Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:43 am

BEEN EATING THEN ASKS THEM



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Post  Mona on Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:02 am

WHY THEY WERE LOOKING SO

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Post  Puck on Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:29 am

CHEERFUL.

1644: HERMIONE LEADS RON



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Post  Verity Weasley on Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:37 am

OUT INTO THE GARDEN WITH

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Post  Potteraholic on Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:49 am

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HER KERCHIEF COVERING HIS EYES.                 .



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Post  Julia H. on Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:43 am

RON TRIPS OVER THE THRESHOLD

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Post  Potteraholic on Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:06 pm

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Hmmm... the threshold of what? I thought they were out in the garden already. And the car's out of the shed, right? Gleaming in the sunshine? Or did Hermione and Arthur put it back in the shed? The shed's threshold? So... I'm stalling...


AND HERMIONE TUMBLES ALONGSIDE HIM.                 .

Made the following changes in the story:

1) Added '1517:' here to make up for the 'a' repeated in this post.

2) In this post, for consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.

3) Changed 'in' her face in this post to 'on' her face, as 'on' fits the phrase better.


story update #3/#4  



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Post  Verity Weasley on Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:24 pm

I CONSIDER TRIPPING HIM AGAIN

Although Crookshanks said that Hermione leads Ron out into the garden, he could still be tripping on the threshold on the way out. I don't think it really matters. It still makes sense as it is. cat

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Post  Potteraholic on Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:40 pm

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, BUT DECIDE IT'S NOT WORTH                

I hope with all this tripping, no one gets too hurt to see the new and improved Ford Anglia. Or lands on it, if it happens to be out on the lawn still, and get a dent in its new bodywork.





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Post  Verity Weasley on Mon Jul 04, 2011 3:04 pm

THE RISK. LAST TIME I

Yes, we don't want any harm to come to the shiny old car!

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Post  Potteraholic on Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:05 pm

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MADE RON TRIP, HERMIONE'S FAVORITE                

This is going to be one of our shorter 'stories'; we're under 600 words so far.



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Post  Mona on Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:57 pm

VASE WAS SMASHED TO SMITHEREENS

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Post  Verity Weasley on Tue Jul 05, 2011 2:42 am

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1646: RON SEES THE BEAST

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Post  Julia H. on Tue Jul 05, 2011 2:51 am

AS HERMIONE TAKES THE KERCHIEF

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Post  Verity Weasley on Tue Jul 05, 2011 4:46 am

FROM HIS FACE. HE SEEMS

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Post  Puck on Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:56 am

CONFUSED. HE STARES AT IT
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Post  Verity Weasley on Tue Jul 05, 2011 2:33 pm

WITH HIS MOUTH HANGING OPEN

How are you enjoying your holidays PAH? Have you just collapsed into a heap? Or are you making plans to go see a certain exhibition? Not to mention a movie.

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Post  Puck on Tue Jul 05, 2011 4:35 pm

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1649: RON HAS VENTURED INSIDE
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