Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV)
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Story #138
For consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.
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WAS IN WORKING ORDER.
1623:
1623:
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I WANDERED INTO THE KITCHEN
Perhaps Ron returns from wherever he's been.
Perhaps Ron returns from wherever he's been.
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RON, WHO WAS LOOKING FOR
Just in time for his surprise... and it's not even his birthday.
RON, WHO WAS LOOKING FOR
Just in time for his surprise... and it's not even his birthday.
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FLYING PEST HAS EATEN MY
Referring to Pig here.
Referring to Pig here.
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DEAD DORMOUSE. I WAS SAVING
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LIGHT SNACK TO TIDE ME
In case some folks aren't used to this idiom/phrase...
Another update coming soon...
LIGHT SNACK TO TIDE ME
In case some folks aren't used to this idiom/phrase...
- Spoiler:
- over until dinner...
Another update coming soon...
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OVER UNTIL DINNER.
1640: RON
1640: RON
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'S FATHER ENTERS THE KITCHEN. RON
I wasn't sure if he'd left, but I figured he'd want to see the look on Ron's face when he sees the car.
I wasn't sure if he'd left, but I figured he'd want to see the look on Ron's face when he sees the car.
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SEEMED SURPRISED TO SEE HIM
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. HERMIONE ENTERS, A HUGE SMILE
Period/full stop needed. ~PAH
Period/full stop needed. ~PAH
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'on' fits the phrase better. ~PAH
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SWALLOWS THE LAST MOUTHFUL OF
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CRUSTY BREAD AND CHEESE HE'D
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BEEN EATING THEN ASKS THEM
Assuming Hermione has finally managed to teach him to swallow first, then talk.
Assuming Hermione has finally managed to teach him to swallow first, then talk.
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WHY THEY WERE LOOKING SO
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CHEERFUL.
1644: HERMIONE LEADS RON
Seems as if this story is winding itself down quite nicely.
1644: HERMIONE LEADS RON
Seems as if this story is winding itself down quite nicely.
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OUT INTO THE GARDEN WITH
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HER KERCHIEF COVERING HIS EYES. .
HER KERCHIEF COVERING HIS EYES. .
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Hmmm... the threshold of what? I thought they were out in the garden already. And the car's out of the shed, right? Gleaming in the sunshine? Or did Hermione and Arthur put it back in the shed? The shed's threshold? So... I'm stalling...
AND HERMIONE TUMBLES ALONGSIDE HIM. .
Made the following changes in the story:
1) Added '1517:' here to make up for the 'a' repeated in this post.
2) In this post, for consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.
3) Changed 'in' her face in this post to 'on' her face, as 'on' fits the phrase better.
story update #3/#4
Hmmm... the threshold of what? I thought they were out in the garden already. And the car's out of the shed, right? Gleaming in the sunshine? Or did Hermione and Arthur put it back in the shed? The shed's threshold? So... I'm stalling...
AND HERMIONE TUMBLES ALONGSIDE HIM. .
Made the following changes in the story:
1) Added '1517:' here to make up for the 'a' repeated in this post.
2) In this post, for consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.
3) Changed 'in' her face in this post to 'on' her face, as 'on' fits the phrase better.
story update #3/#4
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I CONSIDER TRIPPING HIM AGAIN
Although Crookshanks said that Hermione leads Ron out into the garden, he could still be tripping on the threshold on the way out. I don't think it really matters. It still makes sense as it is.
Although Crookshanks said that Hermione leads Ron out into the garden, he could still be tripping on the threshold on the way out. I don't think it really matters. It still makes sense as it is.
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