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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:56 am

MR WEASLEY RON'S FATHER DECLARED THAT IT

For consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.
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Post  Puck Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:27 pm

WAS IN WORKING ORDER.

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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:37 pm

I WANDERED INTO THE KITCHEN

Perhaps Ron returns from wherever he's been. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 5 2752390508
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Post  Julia H. Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:46 pm

JUST IN TIME TO GREET
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Post  Potteraholic Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:54 pm

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RON, WHO WAS LOOKING FOR                

Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 5 266347159 Just in time for his surprise... and it's not even his birthday. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 5 2222139670


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Post  Julia H. Sat Jul 02, 2011 3:07 pm

SOMETHING TO EAT.

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Post  Puck Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:32 pm

FLYING PEST HAS EATEN MY

Referring to Pig here.
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Post  Verity Weasley Sun Jul 03, 2011 3:20 am

DEAD DORMOUSE. I WAS SAVING
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Post  Julia H. Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:47 am

IT FOR A PEACEFUL AND
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Post  Potteraholic Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:02 am

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LIGHT SNACK TO TIDE ME                

In case some folks aren't used to this idiom/phrase...
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Post  Mona Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:29 am

OVER UNTIL DINNER.

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Post  Puck Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:37 am

'S FATHER ENTERS THE KITCHEN. RON



I wasn't sure if he'd left, but I figured he'd want to see the look on Ron's face when he sees the car.
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Post  Verity Weasley Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:45 am

SEEMED SURPRISED TO SEE HIM
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Post  Puck Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:50 am

. HERMIONE ENTERS, A HUGE SMILE

Period/full stop needed. ~PAH
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Post  Julia H. Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:52 am

IN ON HER FACE. RON QUICKLY

'on' fits the phrase better. ~PAH
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Post  Mona Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:37 am

SWALLOWS THE LAST MOUTHFUL OF
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Post  Verity Weasley Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:32 pm

CRUSTY BREAD AND CHEESE HE'D
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Post  Puck Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:43 am

BEEN EATING THEN ASKS THEM



Assuming Hermione has finally managed to teach him to swallow first, then talk. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 5 1003735042
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Post  Mona Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:02 am

WHY THEY WERE LOOKING SO
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Post  Puck Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:29 am

CHEERFUL.

1644: HERMIONE LEADS RON



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Post  Verity Weasley Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:37 am

OUT INTO THE GARDEN WITH
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Post  Potteraholic Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:49 am

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HER KERCHIEF COVERING HIS EYES.                 .

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Post  Julia H. Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:43 am

RON TRIPS OVER THE THRESHOLD
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Post  Potteraholic Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:06 pm

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Hmmm... the threshold of what? I thought they were out in the garden already. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 5 1242326132 And the car's out of the shed, right? Gleaming in the sunshine? Or did Hermione and Arthur put it back in the shed? The shed's threshold? So... I'm stalling... Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 5 1437562208


AND HERMIONE TUMBLES ALONGSIDE HIM.                 .

Made the following changes in the story:

1) Added '1517:' here to make up for the 'a' repeated in this post.

2) In this post, for consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.

3) Changed 'in' her face in this post to 'on' her face, as 'on' fits the phrase better.


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Post  Verity Weasley Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:24 pm

I CONSIDER TRIPPING HIM AGAIN

Although Crookshanks said that Hermione leads Ron out into the garden, he could still be tripping on the threshold on the way out. I don't think it really matters. It still makes sense as it is. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 5 2752390508 cat
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