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Verity Weasley
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Verity Weasley Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:56 am
He was shepherding first-years towards
I hope Julia and Mona come back before we've finished this story!
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I hope Julia and Mona come back before we've finished this story!
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Potteraholic Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:05 am
joined the line quickly and So now, we arrive at the middle part of our story. We should start thinking about wrapping up no later than 10 posts left, to give us plenty of time to reach our goal without going over or under.
Verity, I was thinking that we might have a tie for the most number of posts.
So far, it's even steven. 
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Verity Weasley Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:57 am
was relieved to see some
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- I was thinking about something to express how nervous or unsure our Muggle-born protagonist feels.
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Potteraholic Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:16 am
bright lanterns lighting the way. Just thinking ahead to the end, I suppose it could be when our protagonist sees the doors to the castle, and is standing right in front of them. Or right before he or she enters the Great Hall? Or some other equally momentous first.
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Verity Weasley Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:34 pm
I tripped, unused to wearing
I was thinking the same sort of thing as an ending PAH. The first view of the castle, or arriving at the front doors, would be a suitable conclusion.
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I was thinking the same sort of thing as an ending PAH. The first view of the castle, or arriving at the front doors, would be a suitable conclusion.
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Potteraholic Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:59 pm
robes, but Hagrid caught me GMTA, Verity.
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Verity Weasley Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:15 pm
before I fell, picking me
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- up as easily ... etc etc - or something else
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Potteraholic Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:20 pm
up with his giant hands. Leave it to the reader's imagination, I should think.Verity Weasley wrote:Will we need to briefly explain how he/she knew Hagrid's name? Or leave it to the reader's imagination?
Hagrid could've easily introduced himself on the walk down to the lake, or another child, a young Potter or Weasley, could've greeted Hagrid warmly on the platform. 
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Mona Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:53 pm
I checked my pocket to
Perhaps to check if his/her toad is safe.
Hi guys! Comments later.
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Perhaps to check if his/her toad is safe.
Hi guys! Comments later.
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Potteraholic Thu Mar 22, 2012 2:45 am
was safe. Toffee was fast Looking forward to your comments about the Felix Felicis story, Mona.
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Potteraholic Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:17 am
lake where many small boats Can the castle be seen from the lake? Move contamination tells me yes, but I don't have the books with me to check.
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Verity Weasley Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:27 am
bobbed gently in the inky-black
The castle can be seen from the lake, but not immediately. If I remember rightly, they get a glimpse of the castle about half way through their journey across the lake.
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The castle can be seen from the lake, but not immediately. If I remember rightly, they get a glimpse of the castle about half way through their journey across the lake.
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Julia H. Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:35 am
water. I tried to get
...closer... After all, this is an eleven-year-old kid and probably very excited!
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...closer... After all, this is an eleven-year-old kid and probably very excited!
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Potteraholic Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:50 am
closer, to board the first Okay, view of the castle seen halfway sounds familiar to me, too.
3/5 of the story is now complete!
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Julia H. Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:59 am
boat. The shore was, however,
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Potteraholic Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:04 am
very slippery, and I nearly I made the shore very slippery, so that the reader could infer that it was very wet. So the rest of the story is the boat journey and then we end in front of the castle's doors? In the Great Hall? On the Sorting Hat's stool? I wonder what it will be?
So far, there are 2 post-story comments for the Felix Felicis story. It would be nice to have more.
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Verity Weasley Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:22 am
lost my footing again. I
I don't think we'll have enough posts to get inside the castle!
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I don't think we'll have enough posts to get inside the castle!
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Potteraholic Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:59 am
stepped into the second boat Nor I, Verity. But someone could always come along and surprise us! Unlikely, but still possible!Verity Weasley wrote:I don't think we'll have enough posts to get inside the castle!
Maybe this first-year meets the same fate as Dennis Creevey, while crossing the lake? Or something else altogether? We have 6 posts/30 words left in this lake section before we start heading for the conclusion.
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Verity Weasley Thu Mar 22, 2012 7:36 pm
with the curly-haired twins and
Maybe just a hint of what lies beneath, rather than investigating it personally!
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Maybe just a hint of what lies beneath, rather than investigating it personally!
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