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Post  Verity Weasley Sat May 07, 2011 3:31 pm

of the frame, but her

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Post  Potteraholic Sat May 07, 2011 3:47 pm

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efforts were thwarted by Kreacher               or Kreacher's _____



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Post  Puck Sat May 07, 2011 5:25 pm

who was able to immobilize

I think the Elf magic could have easily solved the problem, he was just unwilling up until now.... (Need an elf smilie)

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Post  Potteraholic Sat May 07, 2011 5:30 pm

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her with some powerful elf              

This sentence is getting long... Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 793915934 and will definitely need some commas in the final edit.


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Post  Puck Sat May 07, 2011 5:35 pm

magic.

Hours later Luna entered


I finished that sentence off, PAH. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 1003735042

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Post  Potteraholic Sat May 07, 2011 5:48 pm

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the kitchen and announced, "I'm              

Hehe, thanks, Puck. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 2752390508


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Post  Puck Sat May 07, 2011 6:07 pm

finished. Come and see."

Together


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Post  Potteraholic Sat May 07, 2011 6:15 pm

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, they all raced upstairs. Kreacher              

If Kreacher immobilized the old battle axe before, she's got to be mobilized now the painting's done, right? Can't you just see Kreacher being Luna's painting assistant, wearing a beret? Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 1003735042

Edit: So now, with 10 posts left, do we want to add a bit more for some Luna dialogue or narrative about the painting process? Or something else? Or is this story nearly done?


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Post  Mona Sat May 07, 2011 10:58 pm

was gazing at the painting

No idea, PAH. But I think a description of pic, Mrs black's reaction etc is enough to wrap it up.

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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 08, 2011 1:36 am

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, smiling at Regulus, who was                I'm thinking he was talking to K; is Mrs. B still immobilized?

Okay, it looks like we'll need a few more posts to wrap-up this story. I propose 25 more. So...


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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 08, 2011 3:19 am

deep in conversation with his

...mother

I think Regulus would have a lot to tell his mother. I think it's this knowledge, combined with the presence of her favourite son, that will help to change her personality.


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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 08, 2011 8:18 am

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mother.

Harry and the others
              

Thought they had to be mentioned, since they just raced upstairs. But I'm thinking they would hang back and just watch and listen.


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Post  Puck Sun May 08, 2011 8:40 am

were dumbstruck at the transformation



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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 08, 2011 8:47 am

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of Mrs. Black. She was               

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 08, 2011 8:50 am

listening intently to Regulus, smiling

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Post  Puck Sun May 08, 2011 8:51 am

quietly listening to her son

at his every word. Luna


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motioned Harry forward. "It's okay              

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 08, 2011 10:12 am

, you can come closer. She

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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 08, 2011 10:18 am

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won't scream. Trust me. Listen."              

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Edit: I wonder, should Regulus get a portrait of his very own? So that he doesn't always have to be with his mother?

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 08, 2011 3:31 pm

They all edged a little

Well, Regulus will be able to visit the other pictures in the house, even without another portrait of his own. So hopefully he'll be able to have some time away from the delightful Mrs Black occasionally. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 2222139670

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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 08, 2011 3:45 pm

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closer.

"... and you say he
              Mrs. Black speaking.

Ahhh... yes, of course! Regulus will be an itinerant painted figure, a rolling stone that gathers no moss. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 2222139670

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 08, 2011 3:55 pm

just left Kreacher there? But

It's tricky to imagine the sort of conversation Regulus and Mrs Black would be having! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 793915934

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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 08, 2011 4:35 pm

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why would the Dark Lord—"               I'm all about the well-placed interruption. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 2222139670

Verity, if we have Harry talking to Mrs. Black, as current owner to past owner, we can skirt the issue somewhat of how Mrs. Black and Regulus' chat would go, I figure. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 464751818 And then end the story on some note or other... maybe Mrs. Black making some comment to Harry about the color scheme not straying too far into Gryffindor territory? 12 GP being the Ancient and Noble house of Black, after all? Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 1003735042

And on a housekeeping note, if we have to go over 12 posts, so be it. But then we'll need to keep track with a 'n+ posts over' update.


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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 08, 2011 5:05 pm

Noticing the onlookers, Mrs Black

I'm all for well-placed interruptions too, but I'm not sure even Harry would be game to interrupt Mrs Black just yet! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 793915934

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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 08, 2011 6:05 pm

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turned and stared grimly at               

Good point, Verity, re: Mrs. Black still being a bit uninterruptable. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 21 2222139670 I imagine she'll still be cantankerous, and only begrudgingly accept Harry and Ginny living at 12 GP. Old dog, and all that, but without the vitriolic lunacy that used to spew forth.


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