Thanks for your post-story comments, Mona and Verity! i wonder, since we all seemed to enjoy writing this little vignette, maybe we continue with it in a future story? Or maybe flesh out the dialogue more in the beginning, and then continue? Because I agree, JKR does seem to gloss over the details of the trio's "getting to know you" stage, which I imagine would be quite fun to write... 2 children raised in Muggle homes interacting with one used to all things magical. And then, there are the differences between Harry's and Hermione's Muggle experiences, and Ron could mention Arthur's fondness for Muggle objects... I know what I'll suggest as a story should I get to start another one in the next few stories, or so.
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