Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIX)
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some steam. Why couldn't his
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faithful followers be a bit
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more sensible? How could they
Hi, everyone! I'm back on the Forum, and I'm going to post the previous story soon!
Mona, this is indeed an intriguing start of a story! I'm curious to find out where it will lead. I can think of several occasions where Voldy had good reason to be dissatisfied with the efficiency of his followers. LOL.
Hi, everyone! I'm back on the Forum, and I'm going to post the previous story soon!
Mona, this is indeed an intriguing start of a story! I'm curious to find out where it will lead. I can think of several occasions where Voldy had good reason to be dissatisfied with the efficiency of his followers. LOL.
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fail to follow his simple
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instructions?
"Bella!" he thundered, "What
Maybe this is after the fiasco in the ministry when Harry got away yet again and the DEs failed to get the prophecy - or maybe not...
Welcome back, Julia!
"Bella!" he thundered, "What
Maybe this is after the fiasco in the ministry when Harry got away yet again and the DEs failed to get the prophecy - or maybe not...
Welcome back, Julia!
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do you mean by not
I have posted the previous story (it is right at the top of this page) and the statistics. I copied the statistics format of the statistics Verity posted after the Gilderoy story, but I didn't include times (hours and minutes) because I see them in my time and others will see them differently anyway. I don't know what you will think of the title. Titles always give me a hard time, LOL. This title emphasizes the fact that this is the story of something that happens "behind the stage", while something else is happening in the foreground of the canon plot.
My comments: I like Five Words stories where we explore something that we know has happened in the books but the reader never finds out how. And, of course, I like Snape stories! Therefore I enjoyed writing this one very much. Keeping the characters in character is always important, and I think we managed to do that nicely. It's kind of sad that there were only three participants, but the pace was quite quick and it helped us keep the story together. Actually, it was an intensive sort of writing, with little time elapsing between posts, and it even happened once that all three of us were online together for a while, which, despite the low number of participants, reminded me of the old times.
I have posted the previous story (it is right at the top of this page) and the statistics. I copied the statistics format of the statistics Verity posted after the Gilderoy story, but I didn't include times (hours and minutes) because I see them in my time and others will see them differently anyway. I don't know what you will think of the title. Titles always give me a hard time, LOL. This title emphasizes the fact that this is the story of something that happens "behind the stage", while something else is happening in the foreground of the canon plot.
My comments: I like Five Words stories where we explore something that we know has happened in the books but the reader never finds out how. And, of course, I like Snape stories! Therefore I enjoyed writing this one very much. Keeping the characters in character is always important, and I think we managed to do that nicely. It's kind of sad that there were only three participants, but the pace was quite quick and it helped us keep the story together. Actually, it was an intensive sort of writing, with little time elapsing between posts, and it even happened once that all three of us were online together for a while, which, despite the low number of participants, reminded me of the old times.
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killing the boy when you
Good work, Julia! I'm really impressed. Good title, too.
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- had the chance...or something like that
Good work, Julia! I'm really impressed. Good title, too.
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had the chance? You were
Thanks, Mona!
Where is Verity? She must be busy at school.
Thanks, Mona!
Where is Verity? She must be busy at school.
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practically babysitting him when I
OK I don't know if Voldy will actually talk like this, but anyway...
OK I don't know if Voldy will actually talk like this, but anyway...
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and playing games with him!
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it at Bella's throat.
"I
I'm here! Yes, it has been an intense few days at school with lots of new stuff to take in, and then social events in the evenings too.
I will go back and read the previous story now.
"I
I'm here! Yes, it has been an intense few days at school with lots of new stuff to take in, and then social events in the evenings too.
I will go back and read the previous story now.
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will not tolerate ineptitude or
Oh, Verity, it's so early to go back to school! Here it is still the peak of the summer. The weather is very hot, too!
Oh, Verity, it's so early to go back to school! Here it is still the peak of the summer. The weather is very hot, too!
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insubordination! All the difficult work
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- was done by me...(he was the one who lured Harry to the ministry)
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all you had to do
I know. Summer feels like it went by in a blink!
I know. Summer feels like it went by in a blink!
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the prophecy."
"My Lord," Bella
"My Lord," Bella
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fear and adoration. "It was
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all Lucius's fault. If he
I still don't know what story to make of this. Perhaps it can evolve into another behind the scenes look - what happened after the events of ootp and before HBP - Voldy telling Draco and Snape to kill Dumbledore etc. Any ideas, Julia and Verity?
I still don't know what story to make of this. Perhaps it can evolve into another behind the scenes look - what happened after the events of ootp and before HBP - Voldy telling Draco and Snape to kill Dumbledore etc. Any ideas, Julia and Verity?
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hadn't made all those mistakes
Mona, I like your idea. We will see how the story evolves or what other things may happen in it, but this look behind the scenes is a good plan to start with. I like behind the scene stories.
Mona, I like your idea. We will see how the story evolves or what other things may happen in it, but this look behind the scenes is a good plan to start with. I like behind the scene stories.
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we would have the prophecy
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now!"
Voldemort's gaze was directed
Poor Lucius.
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Voldemort's gaze was directed
Poor Lucius.
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