Story #158

Verity Weasley Sun Jan 26, 2014 7:27 pm

Prime Minister looked confused and

Julia H. Mon Jan 27, 2014 2:15 am

a little frightened. It was

Verity Weasley Mon Jan 27, 2014 5:05 am

not turning out to be

Julia H. Mon Jan 27, 2014 4:46 pm

a successful week. He had

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Verity Weasley Mon Jan 27, 2014 7:27 pm

quite enough on his plate

Any minute now, I would think. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XX) - Page 22 464751818

Julia H. Tue Jan 28, 2014 3:53 pm

without the additional problems of

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Verity Weasley Tue Jan 28, 2014 7:29 pm

a quacking junior minister. He

Thanks for checking that Julia. Good points for us to work in. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XX) - Page 22 2752390508

Julia H. Wed Jan 29, 2014 2:18 am

was trying to think of

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Verity Weasley Wed Jan 29, 2014 6:01 am

a reasonable explanation when he

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Julia H. Thu Jan 30, 2014 4:10 pm

suddenly saw Herbert Chorley

Good idea!

Verity Weasley Thu Jan 30, 2014 7:27 pm

disappearing out the door. Quickly

Julia, you repeated 'he' at the beginning of your post, so take six words next time. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XX) - Page 22 2752390508

Julia H. Sat Feb 01, 2014 5:22 am

, with a sense of foreboding, he

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I didn't notice.

Verity Weasley Sat Feb 01, 2014 5:28 am

followed, catching up with Herbert

Julia H. Sat Feb 01, 2014 5:34 am

just as the junior minister

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Verity Weasley Sat Feb 01, 2014 10:31 am

stumbled out the front door

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Julia H. Sat Feb 01, 2014 6:38 pm

.

Policemen stationed outside 10 Downing

Verity Weasley Sat Feb 01, 2014 10:19 pm

OK, Londoners can't go past 10 Downing Street. It's a cul-de-sac, and it's blocked by the police. However, there is always a number of police and a crowd of paparazzi outside the door, so Herbert's bizarre behaviour could be witnessed by these people. Could you perhaps change 'Londoners going past' to 'Policemen stationed outside' or something like that? I mean, it probably doesn't matter in the great scheme of things, but we may as well try and be accurate, if we can.

Street looked over in alarm

Julia H. Sun Feb 02, 2014 6:07 am

at the young politician, who

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OK, I have corrected the mistake. Now, my only question is, how do all the paparazzi get there?

Verity Weasley Sun Feb 02, 2014 6:52 am

was quacking loudly and waving

I'm not completely sure how these things work, but I would imagine there are a certain number of reporters and photographers who have an official permit of some kind to be there. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XX) - Page 22 2752390508

Julia H. Sun Feb 02, 2014 7:20 am

his arms, in a bizarre

Verity Weasley Sun Feb 02, 2014 9:15 am

imitation of a duck attempting

Julia H. Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:00 am

to fly. A crowd of

... paparazzi? I'm trying to stick to your description now.

Verity Weasley Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:14 am

paparazzi rushed forward, cameras clicking

Julia H. Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:30 am

, lights flashing as they took

Verity Weasley Sun Feb 02, 2014 11:03 am

picture after picture of the

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