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Puck Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:37 am
'S FATHER ENTERS THE KITCHEN. RON
I wasn't sure if he'd left, but I figured he'd want to see the look on Ron's face when he sees the car.
I wasn't sure if he'd left, but I figured he'd want to see the look on Ron's face when he sees the car.
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Puck Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:50 am
. HERMIONE ENTERS, A HUGE SMILE
Period/full stop needed. ~PAH
Period/full stop needed. ~PAH
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Julia H. Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:52 am
'on' fits the phrase better. ~PAH
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Puck Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:43 am
BEEN EATING THEN ASKS THEM
Assuming Hermione has finally managed to teach him to swallow first, then talk.
Assuming Hermione has finally managed to teach him to swallow first, then talk.
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Puck Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:29 am
CHEERFUL.
1644: HERMIONE LEADS RON
Seems as if this story is winding itself down quite nicely.
1644: HERMIONE LEADS RON
Seems as if this story is winding itself down quite nicely.
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Potteraholic Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:49 am
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HER KERCHIEF COVERING HIS EYES. .
HER KERCHIEF COVERING HIS EYES. .
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Potteraholic Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:06 pm
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Hmmm... the threshold of what? I thought they were out in the garden already.
And the car's out of the shed, right? Gleaming in the sunshine? Or did Hermione and Arthur put it back in the shed? The shed's threshold? So... I'm stalling... 
AND HERMIONE TUMBLES ALONGSIDE HIM. .
Made the following changes in the story:
1) Added '1517:' here to make up for the 'a' repeated in this post.
2) In this post, for consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.
3) Changed 'in' her face in this post to 'on' her face, as 'on' fits the phrase better.
story update #3/#4
Hmmm... the threshold of what? I thought they were out in the garden already.
And the car's out of the shed, right? Gleaming in the sunshine? Or did Hermione and Arthur put it back in the shed? The shed's threshold? So... I'm stalling... AND HERMIONE TUMBLES ALONGSIDE HIM. .
Made the following changes in the story:
1) Added '1517:' here to make up for the 'a' repeated in this post.
2) In this post, for consistency's sake, changed 'MR WEASLEY' to 'RON'S FATHER', as that is how Crookshanks has referred to him all previous times.
3) Changed 'in' her face in this post to 'on' her face, as 'on' fits the phrase better.
story update #3/#4
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Verity Weasley Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:24 pm
I CONSIDER TRIPPING HIM AGAIN
Although Crookshanks said that Hermione leads Ron out into the garden, he could still be tripping on the threshold on the way out. I don't think it really matters. It still makes sense as it is.
Although Crookshanks said that Hermione leads Ron out into the garden, he could still be tripping on the threshold on the way out. I don't think it really matters. It still makes sense as it is.
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Potteraholic Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:40 pm
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, BUT DECIDE IT'S NOT WORTH
I hope with all this tripping, no one gets too hurt to see the new and improved Ford Anglia.
Or lands on it, if it happens to be out on the lawn still, and get a dent in its new bodywork.
, BUT DECIDE IT'S NOT WORTH
I hope with all this tripping, no one gets too hurt to see the new and improved Ford Anglia.
Or lands on it, if it happens to be out on the lawn still, and get a dent in its new bodywork.
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Verity Weasley Mon Jul 04, 2011 3:04 pm
THE RISK. LAST TIME I
Yes, we don't want any harm to come to the shiny old car!
Yes, we don't want any harm to come to the shiny old car!
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Potteraholic Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:05 pm
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MADE RON TRIP, HERMIONE'S FAVORITE
This is going to be one of our shorter 'stories'; we're under 600 words so far.
MADE RON TRIP, HERMIONE'S FAVORITE
This is going to be one of our shorter 'stories'; we're under 600 words so far.
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Verity Weasley Tue Jul 05, 2011 2:33 pm
WITH HIS MOUTH HANGING OPEN
How are you enjoying your holidays PAH? Have you just collapsed into a heap? Or are you making plans to go see a certain exhibition? Not to mention a movie.
How are you enjoying your holidays PAH? Have you just collapsed into a heap? Or are you making plans to go see a certain exhibition? Not to mention a movie.
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