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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:16 am

of you."

"My dear woman


I don't think Griselda would stoop to Dolly's level.
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Post  Julia H. Sat Aug 25, 2012 2:26 pm

," Griselda said icily, "if that's

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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:57 pm

the best you can do..."

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Post  Julia H. Sun Aug 26, 2012 4:46 am

She picked up an exam
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Post  Verity Weasley Sun Aug 26, 2012 4:53 am

paper and turned away, making

...it clear
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Post  Julia H. Sun Aug 26, 2012 5:03 am

it clear that the Headmistress

... was dismissed... or something similar. I'm using the title in an ironic way.
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Post  Mona Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:20 am

had outstayed her welcome.

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Post  Verity Weasley Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:35 am

hesitated for a moment, then
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Post  Mona Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:38 pm

walked out the door. She
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Post  Verity Weasley Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:32 pm

bumped straight into Ron Weasley
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Post  Julia H. Wed Aug 29, 2012 4:41 am

, who, strangely enough, did not

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Post  Verity Weasley Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:43 am

back away but seemed almost

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Post  Potteraholic Wed Aug 29, 2012 6:55 am

Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 Outsta10     as if he were looking                   

Hi, Verity. The first day of school for students here in NYC public schools is Thursday, September 6th. I went into my school for just a few hours last week to have a look at my room, make note of supplies needed, attend some meetings, etc. But I'm really making a push this week to get my room set-up. With my welcome back letter to the students I mailed out last week, included in the supply list (which usually has 3 categories of supplies: individual, communal, optional), I included this section at the end:

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I wonder what the kids and their parents thought of it, if anything. I'll find out next week. Smile

Now that this story is winding down, I need to get ready to post it. I've updated my Word doc and tallied the posts. But I need help with a title, as I have no idea for one. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Verity, you currently have the most posts, with 73, followed by Julia with 48. Mona and I are tied with 21. Smile So Verity, it looks like you'll be starting the next story, which could start as early as this weekend, depending on how long it takes this story to wrap-up.


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no italics = narrative / italics = students' writing / gray *(no italics) = Griselda's inner monolgue


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Post  Verity Weasley Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:30 am

for someone.

"Er, Professor," he


Hee Hee! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 1003735042 Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 3735003615 That's so cool that you included that in your welcome letter PAH. I wonder what the reactions will be.

I'll have to think about the title, PAH. It's not really my forte. Also, I don't want to hog the story-starts, so perhaps Julia would like to start the next one. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 2752390508 Julia?
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Post  Potteraholic Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:49 am

Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 Outsta10     said solemnly, "... there's a problem                   


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Post  Julia H. Wed Aug 29, 2012 11:00 am

in the Transfiguration Department. Peeves

Thanks, Verity, for the offer! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 2752390508 I've actually got a story idea, so if it's OK with everyone, I would start the next story with pleasure.

LOL, PAH, at the supply list! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 2222139670

As for title suggestions... the choice of the title may also depend on whether we want to finish the story by returning to Griselda or with Umbridge going away with Ron - and then I wonder how far we'll see her go. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 464751818 In the latter case, the title may perhaps suggest the momentary calm before the storm. If we finish the story with Griselda, the title could perhaps refer to her more directly. Hm... that wasn't much help, probably. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 1437562208


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Post  Verity Weasley Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:33 pm

is going crazy, smashing everything

I think we should end the story with Umbridge and Ron, but I don't think we need to follow them very far at all. We really just need to get Dolly's reaction.
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Post  Julia H. Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:45 pm

to pieces. I have tried
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Post  Potteraholic Wed Aug 29, 2012 10:42 pm

Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 Outsta10     telling him to stop, but                   

Okay, I think if no one has a specific idea for the title, I'll just leave the title as 'Story #148' and if anyone thinks of a better title later, I can add it in.

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Post  Verity Weasley Thu Aug 30, 2012 5:47 am

it's no good." He trailed
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Post  Julia H. Thu Aug 30, 2012 7:17 am

off uncomfortably as Dolores scrutinized
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Post  Verity Weasley Thu Aug 30, 2012 7:25 am

him intently, an unreadable expression
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Post  Julia H. Thu Aug 30, 2012 8:14 am

on her face.

"Well," she
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Post  Verity Weasley Thu Aug 30, 2012 8:21 am

said, taking out her wand

A couple more posts should do it.
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Post  Potteraholic Fri Aug 31, 2012 9:27 am

Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 Outsta10     and walking towards the door,

and calling out behind her,                   
Yep, I'm stalling. Sorry. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVII) - Page 22 1437562208

I thought of a title, 'Cross Examinations'. It might not be the best, but it's the best I could come up with.


EDIT: Changed my post. See note here for an explanation.


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