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Post  Julia H. Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:59 am

appears to be uninterested in

I know that deep down Snape and McGonagall have more in common than meets the eye! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 464751818

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Post  Mona Fri Sep 23, 2011 10:58 am

things like teamwork and communication

LOL, Julia! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 464751818

BTW, I edited in my choice of story for FSOTW in my previous post. You may have missed it since you posted soon after. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2752390508

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Post  Verity Weasley Fri Sep 23, 2011 11:13 am

. He would do well to

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Edit: That's an interesting little story you chose to feature Mona. I had a vague memory of it, but it was good to re-read. I agree that the personalities of the three sisters came across quite nicely in the dialogue, and although Bella and Cissy only featured in the first part of the story, it was a natural exit for them. I can just imagine us posting away and someone introducing the idea of the strange source of the noise. Most of us would have been racking our brains wondering what on earth it could be, but one poster came up with the perfect explanation, which fitted in so neatly with the rest of the storyline you would think it had been planned that way all along. Of course we know that is never the case! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2222139670 Great choice Mona.
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I'm sure he hasn't won that many for Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2741297909 b/c of this behavior.

Great choice, Mona! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2752390508 Will read it and comment in a later post.


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Post  Verity Weasley Fri Sep 23, 2011 8:51 pm

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Off to read 'Lost and Found'! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2752390508

Page 58!

EDIT: 'FSOTW' #3 - Mona, it's fitting that you chose a relatively short story as we near the end of this thread, Volume XV, since 'Lost and Found' was a volume-ending story, with a limited number of posts. That accounts for its relative brevity. I. too, have a vague recollection of this story and wish I could remember who had the idea for the source of the ticking noise... I do remember that I came up with the house-elf's name, as well as the wee pet bird's. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2222139670

I think the different personalities of the three Black sisters is firmly established, quite quickly, as Verity said, through dialogue, and while it would have been quite fun to hear more of what Cissy and Bella had to say, their exit from the story makes complete sense in the context of the story: neither of the two are very helpful sorts, and wouldn't be bothered about trying to make Regulus feel better, at least to my way of thinking. They might have made a reappearance at the end of the story if it could've been longer, but all in all, we got a peek into the life of the Black sisters that was quite entertaining and even quite plausible. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2752390508 I think writing a longer story about the three, including some interaction with their mother and aunt, would really present us with lots of opportunities to flex our creative writing muscles. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2741297909


EDIT 2: Mona, thanks for your comments about the report I sent. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2752390508

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'Featured Story of the Week' Comments for Story #81, Volume VII,
Potty Five Words: "Lost and Found"

This story was featured during the writing of Story #140. It was the 3rd 'Featured Story of the Week'. All times listed are EST.

- Mona, Sept 23, 2011 9:44 am: I chose this story more or less at random. I thought it was short and satisfying. The sentences flow well, and the personalities of the three girls come out well in the dialogue. While it doesn't have those brilliant touches that pop up in quite a few of our stories, neither does it have the dragging parts that also pop up in a lot of our stories Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2775603007 , probably because it's so short.

I like the five-wordsy way in which it starts off as one thing and ends up as something completely unexpected. It's a good thing we didn't make the Black household all dark and foreboding, and that the kitchen was a cheerful place with burnished copper pots and pans. That leads a touch of authenticity to the tale.

I suppose, since it started off with all three sisters, Bella and Cissy could have had a bit more of a role to play. We dropped them unceremoniously rather early in the plot, but on the whole the story was a nice little peek into life in the Black household on a particular day. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 3845856932

- Verity Weasley, Sept 23, 2011 11:13 am: That's an interesting little story you chose to feature Mona. I had a vague memory of it, but it was good to re-read. I agree that the personalities of the three sisters came across quite nicely in the dialogue, and although Bella and Cissy only featured in the first part of the story, it was a natural exit for them. I can just imagine us posting away and someone introducing the idea of the strange source of the noise. Most of us would have been racking our brains wondering what on earth it could be, but one poster came up with the perfect explanation, which fitted in so neatly with the rest of the storyline you would think it had been planned that way all along. Of course we know that is never the case! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2222139670 Great choice Mona.

- Potteraholic, Sept 23, 2011 9:03 pm: Mona, it's fitting that you chose a relatively short story as we near the end of this thread, Volume XV, since 'Lost and Found' was a volume-ending story, with a limited number of posts. That accounts for its relative brevity. I. too, have a vague recollection of this story and wish I could remember who had the idea for the source of the ticking noise... I do remember that I came up with the house-elf's name, as well as the wee pet bird's. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2222139670

I think the different personalities of the three Black sisters is firmly established, quite quickly, as Verity said, through dialogue, and while it would have been quite fun to hear more of what Cissy and Bella had to say, their exit from the story makes complete sense in the context of the story: neither of the two are very helpful sorts, and wouldn't be bothered about trying to make Regulus feel better, at least to my way of thinking. They might have made a reappearance at the end of the story if it could've been longer, but all in all, we got a peek into the life of the Black sisters that was quite entertaining and even quite plausible. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2752390508 I think writing a longer story about the three, including some interaction with their mother and aunt, would really present us with lots of opportunities to flex our creative writing muscles. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2741297909





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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Sep 24, 2011 12:32 am

conscientious student, working hard to

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Post  Julia H. Sat Sep 24, 2011 6:22 am

meet the requirements for the

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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:07 am

subject. Her wandwork is sometimes

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Post  Mona Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:56 am

she tends to start giggling


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Post  Mona Sat Sep 24, 2011 8:20 am

than they should. She must

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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Sep 24, 2011 8:37 am

to achieve more consistent results.

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Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 Minerv10     Her essays sometimes lack detail                

Maybe there's a 'however' coming up...?

I am working on reformatting 'The Meaning of the Prophecy' thread at the mo'. My oh my, some of those opinions/theories/interpretations are doing my head in! Especially the posts with absolutely no paragraph breaks. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 793915934 Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 1242326132 Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2351571793 Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 1003735042 Shocked What a Face Suspect cyclops pale confused lol!


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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:08 am

, however they do display a(n)

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Post  Mona Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:09 am

and could be better researched


unexpected element of originality, especially

PAH, don't tell me you read all the posts you're reposting! Shocked

I went and had a look, and I love that little crystal ball with the index link at the end. I'm planning to put in some images for my still-on-the-drawingboard Snape guide, like decorative initials for the beginning of each new alphabet. I'll have to learn how to get it into the right place. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 464751818

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Post  Julia H. Sat Sep 24, 2011 12:41 pm

as regards similes and other

Spoiler:

Wow, Mona!!! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2752390508

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Great idea, Julia, to mention the craft of writing itself!


Mona, I normally do not read the threads I repost, but for some reason, this thread was chocker-block full of these sorts of marks:

¥ n ~ ß Ω ? ". . ."
... so I am having to skim through the posts to figure out what to put in their place. I posted something about that here in the 'The Trials and Triumphs of the Archiving Process' thread. Has anyone else had that problem, with an abundance of random symbols?

Also, Mona and Julia, have either one of you been in contact with John or Lady Arabella? Neither one of them has posted in the 'Efforts to Archive' threads for a wee while. They both have lots of threads archived... it'd be good to try and finish some of the sections that are halfway, or more than halfway done, and I know some of us have volunteered to repost threads for them. Out of 23 sections, 5 are all done! cheers

Thanks, Mona, re: the image of the prophecy. You know me... I love visuals! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 1003735042 I just wish I had thought of using non-forum smileys sooner, when I reposted other threads. It's amazing what's available online in icon size when you do a Google search for images. I made a thumbnail version of that amazing letter B in your post using the image hosting option on this forum:
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While it makes it smaller, it's pity that a lot of the detail gets lost in the reduction. I'm looking forward to seeing what the 'Snape' guide will look like with the images! Oh, you mentioned something about figuring out how get things in the right place. Do you mean like this:
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Julia, an update about the Re-read of Deathly Hallow pre-DH movie, part 1: I decided to post it in the Read-along section, (added: rather than the 'Movies' section'). Also, I posted all the chapter summaries as separate posts followed by posters' comments, then made an index in the header post listing all the chapter summaries. That seemed to make the most sense to me.

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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:47 pm

include more information about the

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Wow! You are all doing an amazing job with the archives. Well done! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 3735003615

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Thanks, Verity! Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 2222139670 But I think that even fewer forum members will notice these reposted threads once Girl Scout cookie season starts. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 464751818

Mona, this was one particularly arduous post to reformat with so many ?s everywhere: (Some were " " and some were ' '. ugh...)
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Two of the poster's quotes I particularly identified with: "Yes, I'm aware that this is insane." "I think my head hurts again..." You can say that again!


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Post  Verity Weasley Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:36 pm

results.

Miss Brown is a


My, what an in-depth analysis of the prophecy! I really liked the following phrase: Fortunately, I haven’t seen anyone insist that this was the case as it makes me want to drive my head in a wall. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 1003735042

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Looks like we'll be done with Story #141 before the day is out tomorrow. As I mentioned in the beginning of this volume, after the 2nd installment of the 'Chronicles of Crookshanks' was posted, I'm no longer going to rush the posting of the finished story and stats. So I could have the story up later on in the week, sometime Wednesday or Thursday, the 28th or 29th.

Verity, half that 'Prophecy' thread is posted, and the other half is a touch less mind-boggling. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XV) - Page 35 464751818 Then, unless Lady Arabella or John Bumbledore pass along some of their archived threads to me (or some other archivists), I'm done with reposting. We're not at 60% yet... it'd be nice to get more reposted before 2012 arrives.


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