Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XVI)
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points?" Ron spluttered. "Whatever for?"
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- ...explained what had happened... I don't think we need to take up too many words repeating the information. I can imagine that despite the point loss, Ron would be quite amused by the thought of asking Snape for an autograph.
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's irritation lessened.
"You asked Snape for
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"You asked Snape for
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his autograph?" he asked Luna, grinning
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his face! Too bad about the
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I don't know if anyone else ever watches TED talks, but I love them and subscribe so that I always find out about the latest ones. Today's new talk really struck a chord - condensing TED talks into 6 words! If you're interested, here's the link.
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I don't know if anyone else ever watches TED talks, but I love them and subscribe so that I always find out about the latest ones. Today's new talk really struck a chord - condensing TED talks into 6 words! If you're interested, here's the link.
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House points."
"Oh, we can earn
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"Oh, we can earn
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those back if we do a
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Professor Lockhart's greatest achievements," Ginny reassured
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words to cover that bloke's greatest
Yep, this is definitely Ron speaking!
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Yep, this is definitely Ron speaking!
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teeth!" quipped Ron.
"Ron, don't be
Verity and PAH!
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"Ron, don't be
Verity and PAH!
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horrible," Ginny scolded. "Professor Lockhart's amazing!
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. I just hope Hedwig gets back
We could easily jump ahead a day or two to have Hedwig delivering Xeno's reply. But I'm not sure whether it will add much to the story to have Hedwig feature again. Alternatively, we could jump ahead to when Ginny and Luna hand in their essays. Or to finish off, we could have a shorter jump to Ginny alone in her dorm as she prepares to relate the events to her 'dear diary'.
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We could easily jump ahead a day or two to have Hedwig delivering Xeno's reply. But I'm not sure whether it will add much to the story to have Hedwig feature again. Alternatively, we could jump ahead to when Ginny and Luna hand in their essays. Or to finish off, we could have a shorter jump to Ginny alone in her dorm as she prepares to relate the events to her 'dear diary'.
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soon so I can read all
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soon so I can read all
If we choose this route, will that mean we'll end up recounting that whole corridor section, which we successfully avoided doing when Ron appeared? If we can add anything new to what Ginny writes in her diary, I think it has to be a bit more than a relating of the day's events. Maybe she reveals a secret about Harry? Like if she does well on her essay, maybe Harry will notice her and appreciate her smarts like he does Hermione's? Or something like that?Verity Weasley wrote:... Or to finish off, we could have a shorter jump to Ginny alone in her dorm as she prepares to relate the events to her 'dear diary'.
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about his encounter with those Heliopaths.
No idea how to end the story, so I'll just go with the flow...
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No idea how to end the story, so I'll just go with the flow...
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in her dormitory, thinking about the
When I suggested mentioning the diary, I wasn't really thinking we would necessarily show what Ginny was writing in it - just that the fact that she was. Since this is THE diary, it would provide a little note of intrigue for the ending.
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When I suggested mentioning the diary, I wasn't really thinking we would necessarily show what Ginny was writing in it - just that the fact that she was. Since this is THE diary, it would provide a little note of intrigue for the ending.
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• 6 words • 6 characters •
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day's events. While brushing her hair,
(My suggestion in my previous that she write about Harry was with her having possession of Tom's diary in mind, to just give a little taste of what we know is coming later on in the year; a bit of foreshadowing of the troubles ahead.)
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day's events. While brushing her hair,
So, for 40 or so posts, we're going to describe that Ginny is writing in her diary, Tom's diary, but not describe what she's writing in it? I'm not sure it will take that many posts to do that, so perhaps we won't need all the 42 posts left after all? Maybe just 20, or so, more?Verity Weasley wrote:When I suggested mentioning the diary, I wasn't really thinking we would necessarily show what Ginny was writing in it - just that the fact that she was. Since this is THE diary, it would provide a little note of intrigue for the ending.
(My suggestion in my previous that she write about Harry was with her having possession of Tom's diary in mind, to just give a little taste of what we know is coming later on in the year; a bit of foreshadowing of the troubles ahead.)
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she caught sight of her diary
OK, here's the diary. Let's see how it goes.
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OK, here's the diary. Let's see how it goes.
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for it quickly, it accidentally dropped
Getting Tom's diary off the floor and into Ginny's hands to end the story shouldn't take long now. 5 more posts more, I figure. But I'll keep the countdown as is, just so we can see if we can do it in less!
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for it quickly, it accidentally dropped
Getting Tom's diary off the floor and into Ginny's hands to end the story shouldn't take long now. 5 more posts more, I figure. But I'll keep the countdown as is, just so we can see if we can do it in less!
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