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Post  Verity Weasley on Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:12 am

until his face was mere

Duh! Of course!  
That's a great idea, but for a second there I read your suggestion as, 'or they could kiss the unicorn.'  

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Post  Julia H. on Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:24 am

inches away from hers. He

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Post  Verity Weasley on Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:29 am

leaned in and kissed her


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Post  Julia H. on Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:43 am

. Porpentina's lips tasted of peach

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Post  Verity Weasley on Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:52 am

and he savoured the moment

Ooh, nice touch!  

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Post  Julia H. on Sun Nov 10, 2013 2:17 pm

to the full. They were

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Alternatively, it could also be something about how they are going to be a team forever. Or something else.  

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Post  Verity Weasley on Sun Nov 10, 2013 7:43 pm

both momentarily oblivious to their

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Post  Julia H. on Mon Nov 11, 2013 2:17 am

surroundings. They didn't see the

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Post  Verity Weasley on Mon Nov 11, 2013 3:59 am

unicorn who had recovered enough

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Post  Julia H. on Mon Nov 11, 2013 3:49 pm

to take a few steps

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Post  Verity Weasley on Mon Nov 11, 2013 7:27 pm

towards them. He lowered his

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Post  Julia H. on Tue Nov 12, 2013 2:40 pm

horn as though he had

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Post  Verity Weasley on Tue Nov 12, 2013 7:43 pm

an idea to separate the

I hope this works. I wasn't sure what to follow that with.  

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Post  Julia H. on Wed Nov 13, 2013 8:29 am

two young people. As he


I thought of something like as though he had wanted to attack, but it may not have been a good idea...    Your words work very well.

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Post  Verity Weasley on Wed Nov 13, 2013 10:09 am

attempted to thrust his head

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...between them...

Now Newt can do something to prevent the unicorn coming between them, and it can be all symbolic.  

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Post  Julia H. on Wed Nov 13, 2013 12:15 pm

between them, Newt became aware

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Post  Verity Weasley on Wed Nov 13, 2013 7:42 pm

of his proximity and spun

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Post  Julia H. on Thu Nov 14, 2013 1:49 am

round. With a sudden, instinctive

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Post  Verity Weasley on Thu Nov 14, 2013 6:18 am

reaction, he lifted Porpentina off

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Post  Julia H. on Fri Nov 15, 2013 1:01 am

her feet and began running

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I suppose the gesture is playful rather than frightened.

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Post  Verity Weasley on Fri Nov 15, 2013 4:04 am

around behind the unicorn, dragging

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I'm having a hard time picturing this scene. Newt lifted Porpentina off her feet, but then he started running? Is he carrying her? I didn't think he could be, but I can imagine him still having hold of her hand. I guess he could have reacted by spinning around, lifting Porpentina up but then putting her down again a short distance from the unicorn, then grabbing her hand and running with her. I would definitely picture it as playful rather than frightened, but I'm just finding it hard to visualise this sequence. How do you see it?

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Post  Julia H. on Fri Nov 15, 2013 4:16 pm

her along and laughing. The

I wasn't sure how to continue after Newt lifted Porpentina (they had already kissed), but I could somehow imagine that he was strong enough to run a few steps (OK, not too fast) carrying her, perhaps pretending he was "rescuing" her from a persistent rival. But I don't mind changing the words if you tell me how. (I haven't been on top form this week. There is a lot of work at the school and when I get to write my five words I'm too tired to think of anything really good.)

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Post  Verity Weasley on Fri Nov 15, 2013 10:02 pm

couple sheltered behind a tree

Don't worry, Julia. It makes sense when you explain it. I've probably just been a bit dense this week. Perhaps Newt could make a joke now about rescuing his damsel in distress or something.

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Post  Julia H. on Sat Nov 16, 2013 5:28 am

while the unicorn stopped and

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Post  Verity Weasley on Sat Nov 16, 2013 5:43 am

sampled one of Porpentina's peaches

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