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Post  Verity Weasley on Tue Jul 05, 2011 4:49 pm

THE BELLY OF THE BEAST

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Post  Puck on Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:22 pm

. HE CHEERS WITH GLEE AS
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Post  Mona on Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:07 pm

IT STARTS TO MAKE SOFT

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Post  Verity Weasley on Wed Jul 06, 2011 2:17 am

PURRING SOUNDS. INTRIGUED, I MOVE

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Post  Mona on Wed Jul 06, 2011 3:57 am

CLOSER, BUT START BACK IN

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alarm when...

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Post  Puck on Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:34 am

ALARM WHEN A LOUD BANG


It's bound to backfire at least once, right?
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Post  Mona on Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:45 am

ISSUES FROM THE CREATURE'S REAR

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Post  Puck on Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:44 am

END.

1652: THE CREATURE HAS




hmmm, no new posts in a while. I came to see if perhaps what I wrote was difficult to follow, it it appears wide open to me, so perhaps you are all just busy?
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Post  Mona on Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:06 am

BEGUN TO MOVE SLOWLY FORWARD

Actually I didn't know what to post next - not your fault, Puck. I'm Ms Easily Stumped.

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Post  Puck on Thu Jul 07, 2011 12:10 pm

. IT CIRCLES THE GARDEN. RON'S

Edit. The previous sentence was ended in this post, without a period/full stop. So I added it in. ~PAH


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Post  Potteraholic on Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:33 pm

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Verity Weasley wrote:How are you enjoying your holidays PAH? Have you just collapsed into a heap? Or are you making plans to go see a certain exhibition? Not to mention a movie.
Verity, all of the above! It's been fun doing nothing for the past few days. Was unexpectedly able to go away on Saturday for the long weekend to stay with some family friends. Popped in to check what was going on here, but never long enough to post anything. Okay, need to get some errands done! Story's going well... love the time stamps, especially!




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Post  Verity Weasley on Thu Jul 07, 2011 5:04 pm

WAVES TO HERMIONE AND SHE

Nice to hear from you PAH!

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Post  Mona on Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:53 pm

GRINS AND WAVES BACK.

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Post  Verity Weasley on Fri Jul 08, 2011 2:24 am

I SPOT A GNOME AMONG

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I was just thinking that perhaps Crooksy could have a near miss with 'the beast' or cause Ron to have to swerve or something, by chasing gnomes across the path of it. Just an idea.

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Post  Mona on Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:58 am

THE ROSE BUSHES, AND POUNCE.

Great idea, Verity!

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Post  Julia H. on Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:53 am

I MISS THE CREATURE GNOME BY

EDIT: Changed 'creature' to 'gnome' for clarity, to distinguish between the Ford Anglia and the gnome, as per Puck's comment here.

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Post  Puck on Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:22 am

MERE INCHES AS I CHASE


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Post  Verity Weasley on Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:46 pm

IT FRANTICALLY AROUND THE POND

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Post  Puck on Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:49 pm

. HERMIONE SCREAMS AS THE CREATURE


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LOL, if there is a pond and Ron swerves to avoid hitting the cat, I can picture what comes next!
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Post  Verity Weasley on Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:10 pm

SUDDENLY CHANGES DIRECTION TO AVOID

LOL Puck! I think I know where you're going with this! I wasn't sure if 'the creature' was the car or the gnome, but either one would work with my words.

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Post  Puck on Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:48 pm

COLLIDING WITH ME.

1701: RON


I think "the creature" and "beast" should refer to the car. Gnome should be gnome, just to avoid confusion.
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Post  Potteraholic on Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:56 pm

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STOPS AND GETS OUT QUICKLY.                

Puck wrote:I think "the creature" and "beast" should refer to the car. Gnome should be gnome, just to avoid confusion.
Okay, so I'm (What else is new? ) Should I go and change 'creature' in this post to 'gnome'? Or 'it' in this post to 'the gnome'. Because I wasn't sure, I just had Ron stop the car and get out. Done and dusted!


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Post  Puck on Fri Jul 08, 2011 6:47 pm

NOT NOTICING HIS PROXIMITY TO

Still hoping to see Ron make a splash. lol!

PAH, can you change the period in your post to a comma? Thanks! (Actually, depending on what comes next, it may work as is.)

I don't think you have to change anything. It makes sense as it is -at least for 5 words.
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Post  Potteraholic on Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:02 pm

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THE POND, RON LEANS AGAINST                

1700: I SPOT A GNOME AMONG THE ROSE BUSHES, AND POUNCE. I MISS THE CREATURE THE GNOME BY MERE INCHES AS I CHASE IT FRANTICALLY AROUND THE POND. HERMIONE SCREAMS AS THE CREATURE SUDDENLY CHANGES DIRECTION TO AVOID COLLIDING WITH ME.

1701: RON STOPS AND GETS OUT QUICKLY. NOT NOTICING HIS PROXIMITY TO THE POND, RON LEANS AGAINST

Just so I get it straight re: creature/beast vs. gnome: as written, Crooksy sees the gnome in the rose bushes, pounces, but misses the creature by mere inches (i.e. he misses the car, which seems to be near the rose bushes, and not the gnome?) and Crooksy chases the gnome some around the pond. Then the creature/car swerves to avoid Crooksy (who's moved on to the side of the pond?). Ron gets out of the car and doesn't realize he's close to the pond. Dunno, I still think the creature should be changed to the gnome for clarity, even if this is Five Words.

Okay, I guess the rear end of the car goes in a bit, if Ron leans against it, or something. The pond can't be that deep, surely, for the car to be submerged?



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Post  Puck on Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:40 pm

A TREE LIMB. IT SNAPS

I don't think we need to get the car into the pond, just Ron.
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