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Post  Puck Sun May 01, 2011 8:05 am

just last week. "So, any

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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 01, 2011 8:25 am

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idea, Headmaster, how we could          

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Post  Puck Sun May 01, 2011 8:45 am

permanently silence the ...er....previous


owner?

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 01, 2011 9:37 am

owner of this house. My
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Post  Puck Sun May 01, 2011 9:41 am

wife and I will be moving
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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 01, 2011 9:47 am

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in soon, and we'd like          

Yes, Puck, 'er' counts as a word. It's a quartet 4 you next time. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 13 464751818

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 01, 2011 10:06 am

a bit of peace and
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Post  Mona Sun May 01, 2011 10:57 am

quiet, so your help will would

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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 01, 2011 11:12 am

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be greatly appreciated... sir."

Phineas
         

Hmm.. for some reason I think it should be 'would' be appreciated, not 'will' be appreciated. Dunno the grammatical name for it... it just sounds right to me with 'would'.

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 01, 2011 12:05 pm

Nigellus Black surveyed the trio
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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 01, 2011 12:11 pm

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carefully, with a shrewd gaze.          

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Post  Puck Sun May 01, 2011 1:14 pm

"And what will I get
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Post  Potteraholic Sun May 01, 2011 1:20 pm

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, if I do decide to          

Puck, you need to use 4 words next time... 'er' is a word, and you used 6 after that post.

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Post  Puck Sun May 01, 2011 1:41 pm

share the solution with

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Post  Verity Weasley Sun May 01, 2011 3:20 pm

you?" he asked with a
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Post  Puck Sun May 01, 2011 3:51 pm

condescending sneer.

Ginny replied, "We
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Post  Verity Weasley Mon May 02, 2011 2:22 am

'll make sure you continue to

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Post  Julia H. Mon May 02, 2011 3:38 am

enjoy your peace and quiet

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Post  Potteraholic Mon May 02, 2011 6:52 am

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. We would also try to          

We have a saying here... it's easier to catch more flies with honey than with vinegar. Potty Game: Five Words (Vol. XIV) - Page 13 464751818

I'm wondering if we are all of the same mind about how Phineas regards/speaks to Harry post-DH. What do people think? I think we need to be consistent one way or the other so that as we write his dialogue, we have a better idea what to write. For me, I thought post-DH Phineas would be a bit, well, nicer to Harry... stemming from a newfound respect for him. But if others think he hasn't changed towards Harry, I'll go with that.

Any thoughts?

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Question: Would Phineas still be quite as condescending towards Harry post-DH?
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Post  Puck Mon May 02, 2011 6:57 am

have a new portrait hung


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Post  Verity Weasley Mon May 02, 2011 7:14 am

somewhere else you might like

I agree with both of you! I think Phineas is condescending towards people in general, it's just part of his personality, but he wouldn't be quite as condescending to Harry as in previous years.
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Post  Julia H. Mon May 02, 2011 7:36 am

to go besides the Headmaster's

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Post  Puck Mon May 02, 2011 7:42 am

office. Perhaps the Ministry or


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Post  Julia H. Mon May 02, 2011 7:47 am

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"... a bag?" Phineas Nigellus interrupted


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Is it OK to call him just "Phineas" in the narrative parts? I'm not sure.
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Post  Puck Mon May 02, 2011 7:57 am

. Hermione looked a bit sheepish

Julia, I've been using just "Phineas" in the narrative.
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