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Story #157
Julia H. Tue Dec 24, 2013 1:13 pm
, leaving her mother grief-stricken for
Actually I was thinking of something very similar.
Actually I was thinking of something very similar.
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Julia H. Wed Dec 25, 2013 5:49 am
A war hero in death,
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- I started in this way partly for a change and partly because Lupin wasn't really famous in life, and I suppose it's his participation in the war and especially his death in battle that has earned him a Famous Wizard Card.
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Verity Weasley Wed Dec 25, 2013 5:55 am
Remus Lupin achieved notoriety in life only
Good point, Julia. This one might be a little sad!
Edited to add 'in life'.
Good point, Julia. This one might be a little sad!
Edited to add 'in life'.
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Julia H. Wed Dec 25, 2013 7:28 am
the Phoenix and a close
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- I thought notoriety meant the bad kind of fame that's why I mentioned that he was a werewolf, but I may have been wrong.
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Verity Weasley Wed Dec 25, 2013 9:53 am
friend of Harry Potter's, although
I see what you mean. Maybe 'notoriety' wasn't the best choice of word.
I see what you mean. Maybe 'notoriety' wasn't the best choice of word.
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Julia H. Wed Dec 25, 2013 8:43 pm
this friendship had been "inherited"
Sorry, I couldn't come up with anything better after 'although'. Perhaps this sentence is getting long and out of control.
Sorry, I couldn't come up with anything better after 'although'.
Perhaps this sentence is getting long and out of control.- Spoiler:
- I think we should include "in life" in this sentence somewhere after "a war hero in death" so that the sentence would read, for example: "A war hero in death, Remus Lupin achieved notoriety in life only for..." or "A war hero in death, in life Remus Lupin achieved notoriety only for..." What do you think?
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Verity Weasley Wed Dec 25, 2013 10:09 pm
. During Hogwarts days, Remus had
Yes, I agree, the addition of 'in life' definitely improves that sentence. It would work in either place, but I think it sounds best after notoriety. Why don't we each have a four-word post to make room for it.
Yes, I agree, the addition of 'in life' definitely improves that sentence. It would work in either place, but I think it sounds best after notoriety. Why don't we each have a four-word post to make room for it.
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Julia H. Thu Dec 26, 2013 7:57 am
been a friend of
Here's my four-word post so you can include the extra two words in your post after notoriety.
Here's my four-word post so you can include the extra two words in your post after notoriety.
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Verity Weasley Thu Dec 26, 2013 8:56 am
Harry Potter's father, James
And there's my four word post, so we're back on track now.
And there's my four word post, so we're back on track now.
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Verity Weasley Fri Dec 27, 2013 7:56 am
job he had, allowing him
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- ...to meet Harry, was what I was thinking, but it could be something else.
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Julia H. Fri Dec 27, 2013 8:03 am
to meet Harry Potter and
Thanks, Verity! We have had a lovely Christmas and today we are expecting guests (five or six people) so we have been quite busy for the past 24 hours.
Thanks, Verity! We have had a lovely Christmas and today we are expecting guests (five or six people) so we have been quite busy for the past 24 hours.
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Julia H. Fri Dec 27, 2013 11:22 am
As a member of the
... OotP...
... OotP...
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- Perhaps not everything he did as an Order member was mentioned in the seven books.
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